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some deep stuff for sure.
and i just love deep stuff <3
the vocal could use more stereo imo.
and your probably right about the mastering.
its full of sounds, and i can almost hear every single one,
thats what mastering also is about.
the song doesnt get boring, there are clearly changes which keeps my attention, and im sure other people will feel the same way.

back to the vocal again,
really soft voice, fits perfectly into this mix.
tho i must say i havent heard the original YET, im about to hear it lol.
so in a more straight forward way;
great song, definitly my kind of music.
vocal could use some stereo, and thats about it.

you get my 4 (i would love to give a 5 but thats just something everyone would do lol)
my vote would be a 4, but if you can change the vocal thingy ill give you a 5 now.

BuggMusic responds:

Thanks for the review! Yeah I get you about the vocals, probably should've spread it out a bit more. The original is a lot nicer sounding, very calming you should listen to it. Anyway, I might come back and change it if I can be bothered haha.

My first first first song wasnt in stereo >__<
My first first first song doesnt had badd >__<
My first first first song didnt sound this good >__<
i mean, wtf <__>

this is pretty good indeed just like you said!
tho i truly miss important things like mastering (also in the desciption)
a good bass (seperated from your melodies -during the kick)
also, somewhere in the mid part around 1:30min it reminds me of another trance song or something >__<
but i just cant get it out on paper lol, hard to remember.
also the pitch down-up(s) -to another key- is pretty well done, makes it more naturally.
and also, just a word that came into my head: cute.
2 bro's doing music together lol :)

btw check out " Jesselyn " for harder music.

TheZaaL responds:

Haha, every song remind you something!!

Thanks, I'll check it out!

Lol hij is best aardig geworden :P
alleen omdat er een pitch in zit EN goede kwaliteit is (anders dan andere mensen zoals je weet wel wie) heb ik een rating van 4 gegeven -___-
pitch ftw!

het middenstuk is ook wel erg aantrekkelijk!
doet me soms een beetje aan de early -dance/trance denken.
dus gaat weer een half puntje bij 4.5

bij 3.28 is het helaas mis voor mij (sorry)
maar dan is het alsof er een 2e song bij komt :P

AeronMusic responds:

"anders dan andere mensen zoals je weet wel wie". Ja ik weet het, hahah xD en ja ik denk altijd aan kwaliteit, denk ik xDxD. en dat bij 3.28. Tjaa euhm... ik wilde het liedje wat langer maken dus verzon ik een andere beat die het een beetje anders maakt.... Dankjewel voor je reactie en jij ook succes met jouw liedjes ;)

well im not trying to be an ass here, but maybe your ears are shit?
but thats not for me to judge.. cz those ears are yours.

-structure-
Learn this word,
search it on the net.
Structure is atleast 40% part of composing.
if you know what structure means, and how to work it out in fruity loops or whatever program you use, show us again :)

-(piano)notes / sync-
i dont say you NEED to read them, or learn to read them.
but a bit of knowledge is always good to have. right?

Thermometer responds:

Im pretty sure synchronization is when two different instruments play at a steady, equal and concurrent rhythm. But yeah, i'll have to look up this "structure".

nice proggy you got here,
tho i really miss some 'underlying' power.

Dude, you really just made my eve!
this really reminds me of early hardhouse, and other dance tunes back in the day!
specially Barthezz (now names Bart Claessen)
some funky shizz!

keosni391 responds:

Thanks man! ;)

there's a shitty zero bomber annoying ALLOT of newgrounders..
its not me, i dont know who is, but im gonna give a 5 and try to push it up here.
oh well +2.67 just another strong vote and your up there again lol.

givin 3.5 is clear right?
i mean, i got slightly annoyed by some false notes that didnt work.
and other aspects in this demo for instance the white noise lol.

MisterJayElectro responds:

There are quite a few shitty zero bombers, my friend. I usually don't really care because I don't expect to get a 4.5 or something like that anyway, haha. At any rate, thank you for your help!

Also, I agree on the white noise. When I first added, I thought it was BRILLIANT, so I added it everywhere and ruined it. By the time I realized how crappy it made it sound, I was ready to just send this song on. I'm trying for a second uplifting trance, and I won't be overdoing it this time (hopefully).

Thank you for your feedback!

old song but a great one <3

Davirus responds:

Thanks, I'm considering going back to this kind of style.

sounds like videogame-trance lol.
nice try :) its not my type of pancake but still.

specialized in: Anti-Climaxing. most of my current projects are mastered to be played at a live stage! meaning: i rarely make a 'home-listening' track.

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