hmm
ill start off good; quality-wise, its pretty good. your melody is nice but, the variation inbetween all the goodies is really tiny.
i like the additional 'pluck' melody playing a backing part throughout the song.
i can hear you slightly 'change' the sound of your MAIN melody at the end part, you probably added an additional sound to your main leads i quess?
it takes away a little repetitive-ness lol but its too late.
you should of have added that extra a little earlier in the song.
now on to your kick, its pretty weak comparing to a 'standard' or 'normal' house track. depending on what track your listening.
i also cant hear MUCH (apart from the beginning and ending) of a house beat throughout, this song sounds like its made to be a trancy/dancy song. -breakbeat isnt house- NOR trance.
than again, the main melody sounds avicii -alike. (i dont like his music-personal taste) but i wont judge it in the scores bc its personal.
anyways, to be short and bored;
all in all a nice dancy track, that needs a boost in every corner.
simple said.